Writing, Hair-pulling, and Rewriting


No, this is not a sexy new sub-genre of erotica.

I am working on my second novel, Book 2 in The Timekeepers’ War trilogy. The manuscript has been 80% completed for ages, but I keep running into snags. I had a development editor look at it, and she pointed out a few things that were definitely bogging me down, so I went back and restructured and rewrote half of it and I was feeling much better about it. And yet, there was still something missing. I couldn’t seem to avoid big chunks of exposition, forced dialogue, and backstory crammed in all over the place, and it was seriously affecting the pacing.

Well, folks. I started reading Outlining Your Novel by K.M. Weiland, thinking it would help me tackle this problem in a new way. I have been a pantser, as in I write “by the seat of my pants,” for the entirety of my writing career. Every excuse for why plotting and planning wasn’t for me has probably passed my lips. But lets just have a look at the data…

I had to cut over 50K words from my MS and completely restructure it to address placing issues with Book One. Now, I’m going through something similar with Book Two. I have done a lot of work studying flash fiction and short story form and practicing the craft as well as the art of writing short form fiction, and my writing has improved exponentially with a little structure…

I’m starting to doubt the wisdom of my hippy-dippy muses.

Reading Weiland’s book triggered a horrific realization for me. I have been writing the wrong book. What I have been trying to write as Book 2 in my trilogy is actually Book 3. I tried to skip too far ahead in my own story and was using exposition and backstory to catch up the readers when really, I needed to “show not tell” what has happened between Book One and my current manuscript.

So I have set that MS aside and outlined an entirely new Book Two, and one that makes a whole lot more sense at this point in the trilogy. If you are new to outlining and want to give it a try, I highly recommend Weiland’s book! It is accessible, and it addresses all of those niggling fears we pantsers have about the rigidity of plotting. I’m still not the kind of writer who has spreadsheets full of every detail of their character’s lives right down to their favourite flavour of ice-cream. But Weiland’s techniques allowed me to build and organic outlining method that still lets me tap into the joys of discovery writing while making sure that I have a road map to follow as I write my story. Her method even makes room for exploration of theme and imagery, something that I always add into my writing anyway, and demonstrates how to use the outline to strengthen these aspects of your story.

So, sadly, I have put aside nearly 70K words and another 20K of rewrites to tackle a brand new book. That is both exciting and sad. The bright side is that much of what I have written will still be usable because I still need to tell that part of the story. And all of the time I spent immersed in the world of The Timekeepers has certainly not been wasted.

I have set a stretch goal for myself to write 1500 words a day on this MS until I get the first draft done. Ideally, I would like to have it ready for revisions in three months.

The other thing I’m struggling with is the urge to go back and apply what I have learned about outlining and structure to Book One. I haven’t had any negative feedback about it yet, but I can see how much stronger The Timekeepers’ War could be if I had known some of these things five years ago. But that’s a project for after Book Three is completed, I guess. I might rewrite Book One and release all three within a nine month period. Dream big!

For those of you who have read and loved The Timekeepers’ War, don’t worry. I won’t add anything new to the plot so you won’t need to reread it (unless you’re curious or just want a refresher!) But I might cut some of the excess–there is still a lot of excess even after my initial fat trimming job–and make those sub-stories into short stories, novellas, and other bonus material for fans.

I’m deep into writing mode, but I will try to keep up with my short story challenges and submissions, too. And I’m going to set aside one day a week to catch up on the other wordpress blogs I follow and my “Thoughts on reading and writing SF”


7 thoughts on “Writing, Hair-pulling, and Rewriting

  1. I’m going to have to get the timekeepers war and read it Sarah, I still have to catch up fully on your blog? Do you think you’ll try yhte blog battle this month?
    btw… I replied to your email last week I’m guessing you’re busy. Hope you’re ok 🙂

    1. Oh, I’m so sorry! I read that and apparently only replied in my head (I have a really bad habit of composing emails mentally while doing other things and then thinking the job is done, lol) I will get back to you today after I get the kids off to school. This morning is my WordPress day!

      I’m definitely still planning to do a BlogBattle and 12 Short Stories, as well as the serial I’m working on. Yesterday I doubled my word count goal so today I might tackle BlogBattle before I start on my novel again.

      I can send you a copy of The Timekeepers’ War if you’d like a hard copy! But I’ll email you and we can get all of that sorted.

      1. That’s ok. I know how life gets. Glad to hear you’re doing the blog battle too I have yet to write mine. Sounds like you’re busy with the writing.
        I would love a copy that would be great.
        Talk soon 😀

  2. What a fascinating process! I hope you get the opportunity to run writing workshops some day. Or should I say, I hope others get the opportunity to take a workshop from you.
    Your career as a writer is clearly evolving and expanding.

    1. That’s something I’d love to do. Maybe after I do my MFA and have some more books under my belt, haha.

  3. There have been a few extraordinary writers who travel/have traveled challenging and tortuous paths while crafting their offerings to the world. Rarely we are afforded insight into the process, and it is a marvelous thing when we can peer into that mystical and arcane bubble of creativity. I have ranted and railed about some of my favourite authors while waiting sometimes years for the next book to come out, and blessed and praised them when it did, the final experience replete with a newly minted stoic and eager patience while the next offering is spun. So, no stranger to waiting for good things to come, I am pleased to include you in my short list! If you sense me ranting and railing across the aether, nod and smile in comforted confidence that there is one out there with endless patience and a devout appreciation for your artistic talents! Also very excited with two books in play, what an adventure for you!

    1. Hi Tyler! I’m so glad to hear you haven’t given up on me! I rewrote book 2 three times in the years since book 1 came out. But it’s finished now, and is just awaiting my publisher’s schedule! I will be doing a cover reveal soon, so you can have a hint of what’s to come… I’m so excited to hear what you think. Thank you for your patience. Readers like you are worth their weight in gold!

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